Wise Lily Stories
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A Family of hedgehogs A family of hedgehogs Came to me today Wrapped up in a pretty box From very far away. And when I opened up the box They all looked up at me "Won't you take us to be part Of your family?" "Oh yes I will!" I did reply "But how did you all know? That I love hedgies oh-so-much They give my heart a glow!" "Oh, that's because a friend of yours Who knows you oh-so-fine Sent us to you as a gift In the summer time." "She knew that you were just the one To give us all a home Where we could dig and play and work With your garden gnome." Thank you sweet Melissa dear For your gift so fine Like this hedgie family You are in this heart of mine. This family of hedgehogs Really make me smile And think of a friend so very dear Across the many miles. © written by Christine Summerfield/September 1, 2019 "
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9/22/2019 11:29:30 pm
Before anything else, I want to say that I was really impressed by your style in poem writing. In all fairness, there is a huge potential in you to be a greta poet someday; someone who is being looked up to by other peoples because of his greatness in writing. Though the piece was kind of short, what is important is the fact that you were able to deliver your message and was able to give a view of how its feels like to be a hedgehog.
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